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Valentines poem
« Thread Started on Feb 15, 2008, 5:58am »
Well I gave you my little crappy poem but I thought I'd share his poem to me it's amazing XD

I lie on the ground,
and stare into space,
the stars start to move,
into the shape of your face.

I see you there now,
looking down at me,
with that cute little smile,
that I like to see.

You say "close your eyes,
tell me what you see,"
I see only two people,
just you and me.

We're walking the shoreline,
with our feet getting wet,
the horizon turns pink,
as the sun starts to set.

Oh I wish I could be,
in that one special place,
as I lie on the ground,
and I stare into space...
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Re: Valentines poem
« Reply #1 on Feb 15, 2008, 10:03am »
I like it :) Good job.
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Re: Valentines poem
« Reply #2 on Feb 15, 2008, 11:24am »
Her boyfriend wrote her it :P Lucky thing. The card was awesome too <33
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Re: Valentines poem
« Reply #3 on Feb 15, 2008, 1:51pm »
Ha, I misread the intro to it :P I thought it said: I thought I'd share THIS poem.

Ha, maybe I should learn to read :P
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